Friday, 12 June 2015
The Bloody Waters
Reflection
I am learning to write a recount about the ANZAC landings.
I am so proud of finding interesting words to be in my recount.
It can be tricky to think of a cliffhanger at the end.
My teacher can help me my buddy can help me and I can help myself.
My next step in learning is to learn how to use paragraph.
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You have put a lot of effort into writing your ANZAC Recount. I am impressed with how you have sequenced your recount and added details to allow the reader to visualise what is going on.
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